The sandman is coming,
close your eyes tight,
he takes you to dreamland,
now sleep through the night
Sweet dreams little one,
till the morning light,
may your dreams come true,
as a new day shines bright.
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I read the rules and I 'm ( insert your religion here)
a born again Christian
Written November 18th, 2004
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this is sweet Sandy. keep writng poems like these... -slick99
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Calmingly Inspiring
Sandy this is such a cute poem that's easy and simple for a little child to comprehend and read that makes it so very dear and special. You are truly inspiring and know how to get to the level of a child, no wonder you are such a wonderful person with a angelic heart. Simple words with amazing strenght of inspiration and hope for not only a little kid but even a kid hiding inside a grown up that needs the simplicity of life just as much as once we were a kid in real life... Thanks for touching reader's heart with your soft tenderness that's lacking in today's world at large.... take care Minoo
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Sweet Comment
Good Morning. Always so nice to read your lovely comment. You are always so encouraging and uplifting to others. That is an endearing quality you have. Thank you for this lovely comment. Yes I will always be a kid somewwhere in my heart because I love children. My own children and grandchilren have been my life line and the source of my strength through some pretty dark times in my life. Being a mom has been the most rewarding thing in my life. So I find it easy to be on the level of a child as I wrote this. Bless you my friend. Hope you are enjoying this lovely weekend
Take care, Sandy
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It's a bit long, and the wording makes me think more of something a parent might say to a child as they lay down to sleep. I will say though that you certainly deserve the applause you've recieved.
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Thank you for the nice comment. It is appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Sorry I didnt get to your poem earlier...had things going on here that needed attention..I thought this was really cute and very easy for a child to recite..ty for sharing..all the best
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Thank you again Melanie , you made me smile Take care my friend
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Well I can hardly read your poems without feeling lifted afterwards... You are a great inspiration to me Sandy... Your writes seem to reach out and grab the reader right in the heart.
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Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much Melanie. You are always so nice in your commenting. That means so much to me. Take care, Sandy
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this is really awesome... i mean really!
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Sandy,
This was very well written.... mmm...feeling sleepy myself...hehehe... I want to enter this one myself, hopefully my mind will unfreeze. Best of luck to you in the contest! You are a sure fit for a trophy in this one!!
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Thank you for your lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed it. It was a fun poem to write. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Take care, Sandy
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this is a sweet poem and a fun little prayer.
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I like it... its different... but good write... <3
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