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You know it's funny

You know it's funny
How words, can turn into romance,
Then romance can turn into love.
The words, you uttered to me
Seemed meaningless. at the time,
But I now see, the relevance
It has had to my life
And my love.
I remember the words, you spoke
lovingly, for me only to hear,
I can't believe it, I've lost you now
Forever.
I really want you back,  
I want to hear those words again
uttered in my ear, lovingly,
I need you to love me.
Why can't you?
What's that I hear, deep in my soul?
Because you let him go.
How irrelevant I am now, Living
Life half heart-idly.
Not really living at all, whats the use?
I want him back, But
I can't have him.
If only. If only, I- me- she
Hadn't let him go,
Maybe I would be happier-
Or maybe not.

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Written November 18th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • January 24, 2005
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    Awwe. I love this, and I can completely relate, you did a wonderful job.

  • Wacky-Woman
    December 22, 2004
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    please make a true and fair comment on my work