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Baby Talk To Me (short poem)

Baby talk to me,
What's wrong?
I see you crying so hard,
Baby talk to me,
I hear you are mad at someone,
Baby talk to me,
I need to hear you voice so much right now,
I just need to know what's wrong,
Maybe I could help you out,
Did I hurt you or something,
Baby talk to me,
I love to hear you so much right now,
Baby,
Baby I wonder what's wrong,
Because I saw you upset,
and I just wanted to see what's wrong,
and why you were crying,
Maybe you are lonely,
or maybe you are hurt inside,
Baby talk to me,
Come on and talk to me,
I want to hear you,
and I need  to hear you,
Baby talk to me.


-write more later- continued... soon.

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Written November 18th, 2004

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  • November 18, 2004
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    I can see her face in the background

    I wonder why, people have to cry, to expel the pain inside? Or why, they would rather up and walk, than open up and talk? But that is life. I can really relate. I feel the same way, too often, it seems. I really enjoy this poem, because I feel it speaks to me.