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Proverbs

-The evil of man is messured by the intent of his rightiousness

-To dwell on what we want is to starve our minds of what we need

-To be lost is to be found and too blind to notice

-At night we sleep, at day we wake, but is the moon not more gentle on our eyes?

-To ask why is to desire true knowledge

-If I had one wish it would be to have nothing to wish for

-Man sins for God's attention, apparently it works

-To sin is to be human, to be perfect is to be dead

-A person is only as good as the truth they are willing to admit to

-Pain is life, I doesn't hurt to die

-God is a thing; an object is bigger than us

-'Live your life' are words to live by

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Written November 17th, 2004

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  • K-Dense
    February 19, 2005
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    A few months ago, back in December, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an offical invitation to join my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
    PS Please feel free to read any/all poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself).


  • Adrasteia
    December 15, 2004
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    sweet!! 2,3, and 7 are really good but the others are great as well good luck


  • Vickie J
    December 13, 2004
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    4 and 6 were my favorites out of the bunch, not that they all weren't great


  • Night Dragon
    December 13, 2004
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    Do you honestly know any bible huggers who would dare refer to God as a mere object, or "thing" as I so strongly put it?


  • December 13, 2004
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    funny like what? what you don't hug them? what do you do... spit on them? Ok, I won't call you that again. P.S. it's proverbs, not poverbs... lol


  • December 13, 2004
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    thats gentle... lol not gental...
    very dark for a bible hugger


  • Karen Sue
    December 12, 2004
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    haha awesome, I never thought of doing that. you could have sooo many if you would do ecclestiaes 3 (is my spelling right? I only know of once where i actually spelled that right)
    Good Luck

    -Karen Sue-
    Romans 8:28

  • mysticriver
    December 10, 2004
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    Wow...all of these one liners are good.
    Good Luck.

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