Do you know how much I love you?
does the moon rise every night?
The stars shine bright from above
just as they shine for you and me.
Oh let me feel your arms around me
twirl me around and around
spinning with the dizziness of love.
Walk with me along the riverside
hand in hand, as we gaze adoringly
into each others eyes.
kiss me my sweet, kiss me now
let me feel the touch of your lips.
Oh sweetheart, look at the flowers
my they look so pretty,
shall we pick some my love?
There's a waterfall further up
let's take a stroll and see,
oh my love how lovely it is!
thank you my sweet for showing me
this beautiful part of your country.
Author notes
Written November 17th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
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This is a lovely walk down a love filled lane with nature as a generous consort and a sweet host and the night would never have been bright..if not for two lovers hand in hand equally understand the pleasure thats their leisure==Shubs
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Awww... this is so beautiful. I love the image you used above to accompany. This is very touching. I enjoyed it greatly. Thank you for sharing it.
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Ohh this is very beautiful... The love is so vivid and the picture is absoutly wonderful.. I love reading love poems they are the best to read... And this one is one of the best I have read... You are a very talented person Keep up the good work
Jenn
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thank you sweetie for your kind words and comments on my poems-jennifer
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Oh dear, that reminds me of something and you made me missed him more! And the photo it's very refreshing the same with your piece. It's full of love, hopes and a positive feeling to go on. Beautiful indeed. Keep up the good work, I love the way you write!
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gorgeous
Mornign walk and evening walk
for health we know and so we talk!
lovers walk is walk on a cake
The road is straight and slanting
Leading to heaven enchanting!
No hurry or no worry about destination
the walk is thro flower gardens,
the talk is about love and love alone!
Touch each other and watch
Beauty that both enjoy!
Kiss and embrace both entertain
Interwoven are their bodies
stand leaning on each other
The walk is their own pleasure
They spend all love's treasure!
Nice write sweet Jenni -
jennifer, very nice. Love can be so wonderful, just as described it. I was once feeling this very way, so I understand and can relate to the feelings. But just as love comes along, sometimes people can fall out of love, and that is something like someone passing when a love bewteen two people have died. I was married, and when she turned to me and said she didn't love me....I asked HOW? and WHY? I hope you never have to feel that kind of pain. For what you described is the most wonderful feeling to feel. I hope someday to feel it again. Thanks for such a wonderful poem on LOVE. ~Bud~
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Very touching poetry. Keep on writing
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