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two girls and their fantacy : the beginning

She came home, but something seemed dfferent. She climbed all eighty-two stairs and made her way to her bedroom that was right beside the dark room. The dark room, where all the dark myths came true nothing but darkness was in that room. She stepped into her room and noticed some one laying in her bed. She had beautiful long blonde hair a georgeous body structure with breats no bigger than a handful with a sexy black lace garder belt with heels and fish nets to top it off. She recondnized her from the night before and stated ger name "Lynna" She asked what she was here for "well last night was so fun i thought that it would be nice to have a second time between us Victoia" Lynna said. Victoria made her way over to her and kissed her neck. Doing so this shot Lynna right through the roof in horny-ness.
Lynna undid Vikkys shirt and tossed it across the room landing on a chair, after her shirt came her skirt that ruffeled to the middle of her chins, and then her pretty pink bra and undies. Lynna returned the favor and kissed her neck and made her way down (what comes next!)Vikkys breasts were firm and her nipples were hard this made it very easy for Lynna to suckle on.

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I ADDED ON SUM MORE STUFF!!
Written November 17th, 2004

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  • Elsie
    November 25, 2004
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    nice! when will teh rest come? Do you know where to find more lesbian erotica on this site?

  • Arcomage
    November 22, 2004
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    sweetness! I loved this even though it was short. Keep me posted if you do any other lesbian poetry k?

  • freakissue
    November 18, 2004
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    that was a good write, an yes where is the rest of it? cuz that is definitely a teaser!

  • trig19shy14
    November 18, 2004
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    hmmm ya you need to write more you cant just go around arousing people then stop! great write.


  • Maiden of Mourning
    November 17, 2004
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    Nice

    Ooh, this was very sensual. I can't wait to read the rest of it. You are off to a good start. You definately peaked my interest.

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