Seamless scars
Orbiting my heart
Robbing me of dreams
Ripping my world apart
Officiously oppressing
Wickedly tart
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Been awhile since I've done an acrostic...thought it about time 
Written November 17th, 2004
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lol...I am not purposely seeking out your acrotics...but I sure don't mind happening upon them...
S♥m
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I like this a lot, it has a very in depth meaning to me and you know why, you almost described the meaning of it for me better then I did......
Shattered Remains
R13O13 -
i love acrostics, especially this one. GREAT work. i felt emotion in every word..
and i like the background too!!
keep it up, sorry i haven't been on a while.. a long while
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Thanx Chad I try my darndest
~~Tina~~ -
badass...you never cease to amaze me. Flows with perfection in defining the magnitude of sorrow you behold.
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perfect! amazing! wow! to say more would be disrespectful to the poem. that's one of the hardest forms of poetry. I love this one. I hope I can write something like that one day.
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Thankyou Sam You always leave me such wonderful comments...very much appreciated I might add
Take Care
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This is a perfectly done acrostic. I love how each line eases itself into the next. Great job. Beautifully done.
Sam
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