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Luck

Ring!
Ring!
Ring!
Hello? Is anyone there?
Nobody answers, so I hang up

Ring!
Ring!
Ring!
Hello? I don't think this is funny!
Nobody answers, so I hang up again

Ring!
Ring!
Ring!
Ring!
Ring!
This time, I've learned my lesson...I don't pick it up, and don't intend to ever again.
I guess it's too bad, because this time it was you calling...

Author notes

watching the sunrise that day, i wrote this
Written April 23rd, 2003

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  • ecrivain01
    July 26, 2005
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    This is funny and sad at the same time. Then again, Mark Twain said that all humor is rooted in sadness. I suppose he was right.


  • OurNeedToBleed
    December 14, 2004
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    I like this..a lot of feelign to it..pretty nice. Iguess I can relate to it, not with a phone call but with other situations that I've wasted with someone because of a misunderstanding.