from the tree top
a single leaf is plucked
by a gentle autumn breeze
landing by my feet
I feel the world turn
yet another cycle
Andrew Hide
17~11~2004
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Written November 17th, 2004
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awww wow this is so well describe that i could see it all happening in my mind, such lovely images.for few lines you tied it in all so well together. this is fantastic.
Shanelle -
brilliant....
i love it..
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Just perfect.
Myra -
Wonderful
This is breathtaking!! such soft and warm words....create such a serene atmosphere....and the end such power behind
I feel the world turn
yet another cycle
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Ahh, sweet sleep of Seasons. Very nice.
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Yeah...and another cycle turns in us as well...Beatiful nature poem that breathes in silnet tranquility...
sajonara
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this is wonderful a portrayal of the temporal and seasonal in one little poem..
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