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she wants 2 be experienced




and a girl needs
and a girl wants
and she'll do anything to get there

shes never looked
shes never seen
she wants to touch

and a girl needs
and a girl wants
and she'll do anything to get there

shes never been taken
shes been touched
she needs to expierience bliss

and a girl needs
and a girl wants
and she'll do anything to get there





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Written November 16th, 2004

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  • Maiden of Mourning
    November 16, 2004
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    Very good

    I enjoyed the poem but I was a little confused as to the ending of the poem. Was she touched or not? Maybe the fatigue is settling in therfore I am lacking in better judgment, but I was a tad confused.


  • Michael
    November 16, 2004
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    Very interesting poem. It shows what a girl feels deep inside. We all have those needs and wants, but must have self control in life. Great poem.