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Poemwriter...Who I am

Phrases unmatched
On thin ice
Everything changing
My life begins to twirl
With the flick of a wrist
Revolving doors
Infinite wonder
There is no match
Euthanized soul
Restless girl

Author notes

I know Who I am is not in the poem. Its describing who I am deep down inside
Written November 16th, 2004

A contest entry

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  • -Rosie-
    January 1, 2005
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    Great job with the wording in this one! You are talented, and i hope you take that talent a long way. Excelent job.
    love always,
    ~Jacky


  • nOva-
    November 27, 2004
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    I love this! WOW! excellent wording, eloquent and excellent! (you're pen's on FIRE!)gripping from the start, emotional,very expressive,yet an open sea of vagueness- this is poetry, i'm very impressed keep up this great writing-
    ~sunrise777~
    Edited on Nov 27, 5:52 p.m. because 'typo Oops'.

  • Gogetalife
    November 20, 2004
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    wow,thats great poem..keep up the great work