The soft pattering of rain on the window beside my head woke me. My dark brown eyes struggled to open, when they did they found the darkness outside. We were still moving, and I glanced back to Chad in the driver seat. A warm smile was offered as his not so soft mechanic's hands brushed my cheek. I smiled back, closing my eyes once more allowing the soft droplets on the accelerated glass lull me back to sleep.
We drove north and as we continued the rain grew heavier, and so heavy at one point Chad slowed the car to a stop on the side of the highway. My body sensed the slowing and woke, my thoughts instantly wandering to what could be wrong. Chad sat back, his own wise brown eyes watching my slumbering with great interest and care. I stirred, his hand reached out to me, softly caressing my shoulder easing me into waking. A lush, and effortlessly passionate moan escaped my lips as I fought consciousness to the last moment.
"Good morning sleepy." Chad said in that deep lion's growl voice, still with the tenderness of his love lacing the rich tone.
"Why did we stop?" As I spoke I realized the battering of rain had gotten severe. It sounded like softballs were beating down on the vehicle. I sighed and stretched, my back arched under his stare.
"It might be awhile before we can keep going." He spoke with a restlessness that made me wan to gather him in my arms and kiss him all over. As much as I had wanted to, he wanted to get to the house in Maine we had rented for the week.
"That's okay, it isn't long from here anyway sweetie." Attempting to assure him I offered a coy smile. "We can start walking if we need something to do." A giggle escaped my lips and he shook his head extending his strong arms to gently tickle my sides. A delightful laugh escaped my lips as I wondered how long it would be for the rain to let up.
"I have an idea." Chad spoke with a look in his eyes of mischief, of a child plotting to steal a cookie from the jar.
"What's that?" I couldn't resist but to ask him.
"Let's go out in the rain." I laughed aloud at the suggestion.
"We'll be soaked."
"So? Cmon!" He begged as he unlocked the doors. I shook my head and in my disbelief at my actions I opened the car door.
"Well, what are you waiting for? Let's do it!" I winked as I stepped out into the rain. It was cool, the summer air had cooled as well from the precipitation and the drops were fat and heavy, soaking me before I could meet up with him on the other side of the vehicle. I laughed when I saw Chad stripping off his clothes.
"What are you doing?"
"You said we were going to do it." He grinned that grin. That teeth bearing, up to no good, going to be a bad boy grin. I would do anything for that grin. I started helping him shed clothing, and he abruptly began tearing at mine. Our lips met hard, hungry and filled with our lust for each other. His mouth found my neck as my naked body pressed against his. His teeth trailed down my neck with a sensuality that I wished would continue forever. An endlessness of that would drive me to ecstasy countless times.
He ran his hands down my back, the rain catalyst to his destination. His hand grabbed onto my ass. A whisper reached my ears, "I love this." I moaned at his touch. His hands venturing between my legs from behind. My chest pressed tightly to him, the rain lines the only thing to run between us. I felt his hardness between my thighs, and straddled him. His arms powerful enough to lift me, allowing my legs to wrap around his waist. His long hard member wet with rain entered the hot wetness of my slick velvet folds. As he entered me, I felt it, his hardness filling me as I tilted my head back in ecstasy. He kissed my neck, beginning to move me back and forth on him. He felt my muscles clench around him, the subtle movement I could make without slipping form my lover's arms.
I moaned into his ear, and at times bit down hard on his shoulder.
All while we made love against the side of his car, the rain fell upon us. The scent of the woods on the side of the highway was thick with the smell of moist earth, and dead wood. It was an assault on the senses. It went on for awhile, not a soul had driven by. We relished each others body. The love making was reaching a climax. I could feel the pulsing of him within me, a sensation I would never end if I could help it. He tilted his own head back, my own fell below his chin as in the final strokes, he exploded within my dripping slit. I cried out in passion, holding on as tightly as I could not to fall from my body's sudden expulsion of energy. He guided my legs slowly to the ground, and we stood kissing. Exchanges of loving words were whispered as we spotted headlights in the distance. We hurried back into the car, soaked and dripping with the summer rain. We looked at each other, laughing as the car passed us. Chad pulled me into his lap in the passenger seat holding me tight. I grabbed the blanket just in the back seat and wrapped it around us for some warmth from the dampness. We waited for the rain to subside, listening to it's sound cheek to cheek sharing kisses and sweet nothings.
Author notes
Written November 16th, 2004
A contest entry
- Give Us Your Best Erotic Fantasy-Contest by Princess Muse.
1000 points, ended November 21, 2004, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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aww this is so sweet! Great job. aww, someday i hope this really happens. You did a great job. c ongratulations on the contest! Great job, keep up t he good work.
Love ~ Jess ~ -
congrats this was a story worthy of the trophy you received. Great imagery and creativity.
~iccara~
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Very well written...This story is very believable and drips with lust...I am a sucker for making love in the rain...The sensation of the water droplets upon the skin is so delightful...The story held my interest quite well and it was easy to transport myself into the story...You did not go "over the top" in your descriptions and kept it to a romantic feel with sexual undertones...The grammatical errors are easily overlooked since they did not distract from the story in the least...I certainly make enough of them myself...Good luck in the contest!
Victoria Lin



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