you fall from the bed
woken up by a beam
once you open your eyes
vanished is your dream
people have said
many have done
what makes you say
you cant be the one
believe in your dreams
as many have believed
one day you will succeed
as it has been revealed
its all matter of hours and minutes
not of days or years
what you see is just for once
then forever it disappears
lose not a single minute
start the newest resolution
every things history, present's gone
all the eyes are fixed on you, bring about an evolution
it all depends on the beauty
of the dreams that you see
the future belongs to those
who think, someday someone they can be
Author notes
Written November 16th, 2004
A contest entry
- Inspire And Stay Active by orange pudding.
301 points, ended November 21, 2004, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is very stirring. I feel like the air is moving around me.
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Okay
Well, this piece was okay. There wasn't much "wow" in it. Its been done before therefore making it up to the writer, to make sure something is unique to it. Maybe next time. There is always room for improvment.
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