Breathe..(Haiku)

Baby Oil..A Man
What more do you need today???
Breathe in..chest out...

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Written August 3rd, 2002

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Judas Denied
September 21, 2003
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Erotic haikus. Now I have truly seen it all. lol This is neat, brings to mind a lot of most TITillating image. Hehe Do me you fiery wench.
Lapis Rose
August 19, 2002
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neutral
Mm, mm, good, hmmmm.... v e r y cute!! lol Nice poem too. LOLOLOL
Rubee
August 6, 2002
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excellent
LMAO.......cute..very cute!!!!
Zez
August 6, 2002
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excellent
oh jees, what have i wandered into? hehehe
Ocean Gypsy
August 4, 2002
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don't touch it!
Nice...;o)
coffee-agh
August 4, 2002
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excellent
'She tells me she only married me for her body' Not really sure what it all means. -tj-
Lurie
August 4, 2002
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don't touch it!
Hmmmm kind looks Like Dan!!! Where's the baby oil!!!!
haikumonk
August 4, 2002
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don't touch it!
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.............
Lish
August 4, 2002
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don't touch it!
*l* Nice write, Gill. :)
fantastix
August 4, 2002
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don't touch it!
MMM hmmm, why can't I wake up to HIM every morning? lol Great Write!
xliz23x
August 4, 2002
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don't touch it!
lol ok this was cute

liz
Blushfulmoon
August 4, 2002
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don't touch it!
hunka hunka buring love
geez this aint Elvis
loved it sis~~~~~~~
Susan
EmptySoul
August 3, 2002
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excellent
Nice a** wouldn't mind rubbing baby oil on that. Oh yeah, and great poem too!
:o)Desiree
P.S. When you're finished with him please send him my way. Thanks muchly!
August 3, 2002
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wow this is really chilly
great poem Gill

mari
August 3, 2002
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excellent
That looks like me!!!! 20 years ago... LOL
fun read Gill!!
Maltese Falcon
August 3, 2002
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don't touch it!
Ohhhhhhhhhhh Matron! Baby oil does it for me.
NurseChilly
August 3, 2002
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lmao at all the comments...whose knicked my baby oil..fess up..robbing swines..hahahaahaa~~~GILL~~~
heinzs
August 3, 2002
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excellent
I'm not sure I need a man... but I guess I'm willing to try anything once *grin*.
Robbo
August 3, 2002
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excellent
i leave quickly, embarressed by this peice.
lol.
Manicmuze
August 3, 2002
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don't touch it!
Mmmm.....yummy :-)
Nice side dish to my morning coffee !
Ava Noire
August 3, 2002
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*ahem* this is sooooooooo cuuuuuuute!

& the poem is great too! ;)
August 3, 2002
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excellent
hahaha... a little oil for my body please rub me just right *winks*
August 3, 2002
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don't touch it!
:) where'd you get that pic of me from lol :)
August 3, 2002
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excellent
lol donnz....

very provoking Gill...*winks*

~Gayla~
donnz
August 3, 2002
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excellent
I need a nurse, preferably with slow warm' hands
Nam
August 3, 2002
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excellent
so, where is the baby oil?

:0)

Nam