Lost in a world that did not care,
I felt lost and all alone each day,
God's door would not open for me,
I was a sheep that lost its way.
I began to look up to the sky,
were God and Heaven truly real,
my friend began to talk to me,
as I wondered I began to feel.
The Lord was waiting for my redemption,
my life was ready to be reborn,
I was ready for my Salvation,
my life felt so tattered and torn.
God spoke to me one summer night,
His spirit touched deep in my soul,
God cleansed my body of all my sins,
He made me brand new, He made me whole.
As I prayed God lifted all my burdens,
My redemption came through God's love,
my Salvation has brought me eternal life,
Amen,I will die to live in Heaven above.
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Written November 15th, 2004
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this is a really nice write.. it had some great rhyming and a really good flow.. this is realy beautiful and also a really inspiring piece..
i dont really believe in all this type of stuff but it is great to read what other people think about these types of things.. its a whole new concept and the ones that truely believe it always write it down best..
=) ~toni~
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment. I owe my Salvation to a wonderful poet on here, live4eternity. He led me to God's door so I could open it. Take care, Sandy
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This is such a wonderful tribute to our mighty Lord's saving grace beautifully written. I especially like the last line, for it is that one with which I so identify. Well done, poet.
Good luck in the contest! Love and hugs, BonnieQ
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God bless you pozo. You are a a wonderful person. I am glad to know someone as nice as you.Thank you so much for the nice comment. Take care, Sandy
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Great write, I loved it I love your spiritual poems, they're beautiful and wonderfully written and this was no exception
Thanks for commenting on my poem
All the best,
God bless,
Pozo
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. It is appreciated. Great contest. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much Ann. I love to share my experiences that fill my life with God's love. It feels so good. Thank you for the wonderful comment. Take care my friend, Sandy
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Thank you so much for the nice comment. I always appreciate your comments. I enjoyed writing this poem, it reminded me how awesome and almighty God really is. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for the nice comment. I hope you are fine this evening. Hugs to you Steff. Love, Sandy
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This is really graceful, as previous comments say. I especially like your last line. Its always interesting to see ones own philosophies portrayed in their poems!
good luck!
Margy -
Sandy, so beautiful...what makes this so amazing is the part of realization, the moment of: God spoke to me one summer night, His spirit touched deep in my soul and that's what makes this so beautiful! Best of luck in the contest, Ann
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Terrific
Nice work with the rhyming and rythym of this poem. I could feel the grace flowing into your soul throughout this work. I envy that feeling. Keep up the great writing. Take care and God Bless.
Michael -
good write sandy.
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