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My Darling Kalen

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The day we met through our friend Bud
was the beginning of a strong friendship.
Morning and night we always say hello
good morning, goodnight, we never miss,
you are my sweet Canadian friend.

You are going through a bad time now
one that is tearing you apart inside
tears you cannot stop from flowing.
Wish that I could reach out and hug you
hold you in my arms and comfort you
wipe away the tears, bring back a smile.

Remember the good times my sweet
the time you watched the bird sitting
on your windowsill, what pleasure
It gave you, how you laughed!
The geese you shared with me
how beautiful they were in the lake
outside your window.

Kalen  dear friend, I am here for you
so take a deep breathe and smile
all will work out, you will see.
Just have faith in yourself again
Go with your heart, listen to it,
Know that I love you very much.









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Written November 14th, 2004

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  • SusanL
    November 21, 2004
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    Kalen is well because of friends like you
    the generous words that you share so true.
    Friends are friends when the chips are low
    That gentle shoulder where our tears can flow
    in your loving words and gentle prayer
    It is easy for one to see you truly care.

    Joan -
    I have seen it with kalen and Hugh and others that you are a true friend and a blessing to al that know you. Keep shining lady you are a true light here.
    Susan


  • sidewinder silver member
    November 21, 2004
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    this shows my friend your loving heart.
    what would we do without people like you.
    you find those ways to make us smile without ever saying a word! Thank you my friend!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • smiley
    November 19, 2004
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    Joan,
    I pray that Kalen will heal in time. This was wonderful tribute to her. I know that you will always be there for her.

    Yvonne


  • poetryality silver member
    November 19, 2004
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    CONGRATULATIONS on winning the SILVER! This poem is a poem written from the spirit of motherly love, and it shows that you are a true angel and friend. Very worthy of the merit received. I love you my sweet sister/freind.

    With All My Heart
    Renee


  • Deke
    November 18, 2004
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    Hi Joan,
    I'm sorry to hear that Kalen is going through a rough time. I haven't talked to her in several days. I know that she is glad to have you for a friend. I really enjoyed your poem and know that she did liked it as well.
    Damon D. Brewer


  • angelica silver member
    November 18, 2004
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    Thank you my darling Rosa for your wonderful comment~I love you too my dear Niece~Love Auntie Joan

  • RoughRider
    November 18, 2004
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    Beautiful as the poet

    My dear Auntie Joan I love you so much, your words always inspire not alone the person you wrote the poem to but for anyone who reads your beautiful words!


  • MagicLady silver member
    November 18, 2004
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    I hope we did what we set out to do......cheer up Kalen!


  • angelica silver member
    November 18, 2004
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    thank you my Darling Sam for the Silver trophy, it was a wonderful surprise to wake up to this morning. I am so thrilled even though I only entered mainly to encourage Kalen that all will be well, it is still a thrill.Thank you once again my sweet~Love~Joan


  • qnhoneybee
    November 18, 2004
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    Congratulations on your Silver trophy. This was a beautiful poem!


  • poetryality silver member
    November 16, 2004
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    My Dearest Joan,

    My sister and friend. You are always there for everyone. I am sure Kalen would want you to know that she would do the same for you, be there. Your words of encouragement, and inspiration are beautiful. How could our little sister/friend not do better behind this positive message you write in your poetry. We are all giving hugs for this precious young one and her sister. I know with her in our hearts and prayers all will be well. This is so like you Joan, so from the heart. No need for luck in the contest because win or lose these words will always ring true! I LOVE YOU!!!


  • November 15, 2004
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    Oh, a picture to go with the name. Both are beautiful. I am glad you put that here for us to see her. Your write is beautiful as well.


  • angelica silver member
    November 15, 2004
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    You were right my darling Kalen i was thinking of the pics of the swans you sent me, I remember it was geese so I have changed it. I love you too my sweet so very much~Love~joan


  • Nelak
    November 15, 2004
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    Thank you Joan! I love you

    Joan,

    Thank you so very much. I love you with all my heart. You know that. We do always chat with each other -whomever is going to bed first or who just woke up. You are such an inspiration to me and I thank you deeply for that. Just a little something -in the pond it is geese, not swans unless you were talking about the pictures I sent you of swans that one time. Love you tons. And thank you again.

    ~ Kalen


  • Maureen silver member
    November 15, 2004
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    Very sweet poem, my dear soul friend! I'm so glad you included a picture of Kalen..she looks just the way I pictured her.

    Love and Hugs,
    <3 Maureen


  • qnhoneybee
    November 15, 2004
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    This is a beautiful poem for Kalen and I am sure that she will feel your hug even across the miles. This is such a sweet and tender write for such a sweet and tender person. I am glad she has so many that care about her. Your name suit you well, you are an to so many.


  • SEA angel gold member
    November 15, 2004
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    Angelic Grace

    This a lovely poem and what a beautiful photograph of grace personified. Very Well written because sincerely written.


  • budlem
    November 15, 2004
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    Joan....this was wonderful. So well written and straight from the heart and soul. Yes, we are always here for each other. That's what true friends are all about. ~Bud~


  • Samplette gold member
    November 15, 2004
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    You are an angel of love, and you sprinkle you poetic angel dust wherever it is neede. This is so sweet and personal. Thank you so much for entering this contest and giving Kalen a special poetic hug.
    Sam


  • MagicLady silver member
    November 15, 2004
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    Oh dear,
    I got all teary eyed reading this poem. I remember Kalen sharing the story about the bird on the window sill as well.
    We learn from our hard times, and that is what makes us stronger. It is an easier thing said than done. Kalen has a strong family and friends, so she will get through.
    Thanks for writing such a moving, personal piece for her.

    What a wonderful photo of Kalen (or is it Kristina )

    Cheryl


  • wheezyanna
    November 15, 2004
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    Dear Angelica - I do not know Kalen, but I am sure she will draw strength from your beautiful poem.My best wishes to you both. Anne


  • hugh wyles silver member
    November 15, 2004
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    Dear Kalen and Joan,
    I am so sorry to read from Joan's poem that Kalen is passing through a sad period. Without knowing the circumstances or cause I want to say "hold fast to your faith and better times will come as surely as day follows night."
    Kalen, you have a love and appreciation of beauty and nature which is not gifted to everyone. This will help you through.
    Thank you Joan for this lovely supportive poem for Kalen who I know is very close to your heart. I applaud your tribute and wish you best of luck in the contest.
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.


  • ceegeeess
    November 14, 2004
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    very nice

    "tears you cannot stop from flowing.
    Wish that I could reach out and hug you
    hold you in my arms and comfort you
    wipe away the tears, bring back a smile." so nice dear Angelica. Your friendliness is reflected in these line! Kalen is my lovely child and my nice words go to her as well. I wish her all happiness and fine life ahead


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