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Thoughts

My mind has always been racing
sorting through everything that I do
but lately when I try to stop thinking
I still find myself thinking of you
it's bad because that's probably not right
I mean, I know that it's definitely wrong
but somehow in my own mind
I've been helping these thoughts along
I keep thinking about all the good
and how important you are to me
I keep ignoring the complications
and how I know things have to be
it's just that you know me so well
even though it's been such a short time
maybe I'm being way too dramatic
playing stupid tricks in my mind
I probably won't even show you this
even though I know it's all really true
but in case I do ever get brave enough
you'll know I'm still thinking of you.

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Written November 13th, 2004

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  • kiajhs07
    November 21, 2004
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    i know the comment i just gave had absolutely nothing to do with this poem, which i thought was a great write by the way. i just wanted to let you know.

  • kiajhs07
    November 21, 2004
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    did i tell you yet that i saw fagnio the other day and he was hugging some girl. i missed that hug all week this week :-(