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To God

God,
Im sorry for all I have done
Im sorry for everytime I said your name in vain
Im sorry for everytime I doubted in you
Im sorry for all the times I didnt obey Mother
Im sorry for all the slashes on my arm and jabs to my vein
Im sorry for all my bad thoughts
Im so sorry
Please God forgive
Please dont have me anymore
Oh, God, please please please dont hate me
I am so very sorry
I know that won't make up for all the bad things I have done
I just hope you wont hate me anymore
I just hope I can live my life following Your path
I just hope that I can still be saved
Everyday is just a countdown
A countdown to when I will have to stand before you
When I stand before you, Jesus Christ, I want to know that you know
How sorry I am

Author notes

mm....events that have happened these past days have caused me to have these feelings and write this poem
Written November 12th, 2004

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  • crimsonrain4854
    May 30, 2005
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    God is such an awsome being. But he will forgive you. I know I do know what it is to feel like you have to keep apologizing to him all the time. I love your work, keep writting


  • November 15, 2004
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    wow nikki that was deep....im glad ur repenting cuz God is always there for those who are sorry for the bad things they had done. GREAT JOB!