The worshiping world of Hell
In this land of undesired spells
Fates of wondrous minds of rejoicings
Becoming to thous sweet suicidal sensations
Undoubted beliefs shine revolting
Spiritual world are deluded and drained
Happiness will despise all lights of shining
Chains bound a beautiful minds to thy's movement
Feeding with him with of your anxiety and anguish of pain
Despite his harmfulness
A rather sway personality
To whom follow reluctantly...cowardly
His annihilation is of no more of desperation
But to those who replenish his red wine thirsts
He will reunite his thrown to pray on those who deserted thee
Follow thee
Follow thee's sound
For Lucifer's coming now
His whispers breathe all around.....
~Akasha~
Author notes
Written November 12th, 2004
A contest entry
- Dark! Love! Hate! Pen it! by darkhawk.
300 points, ended June 11, 2008, 11 entries
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Thanks I try to be as demonic as I can and I love your screen name too its very different and creative!!
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LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
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wow! this was awesome...it had great imagery, i just totally love it....great job
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And I say this with honesty that surprising enough.............I am Christian...................just not at all religous though......weird..........but I thought I would try just to show some people we can write athiest-like.....lol..not to be rude I jus was curious thats all thanks for the comment though! Laterz ~Akasha~
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Defiantly a deep poem full of a different thought. Your imagery and wording are perfect.
Thanks for entering my contest.
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Thanks for the comment it really shocked me because I am a Christian and it is very surprising how I can write something like that and sound athiest.Thanks a mill. for the comment!!!
I feel sexy now.....ooo baby..lol...Akasha -
ooooooooooooooh scary
very oooooooooooh provoking
i am a mouse
and i better watch out
very coool poem
very good ending
like i said before, "ooooooooooooh"
sexy poem -ale
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