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The Joy of your Love

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To know you love me is my greatest joy
to feel your tender kisses upon my lips
the emotions we feel when they connect
lips filled with desire as passion rises.
How I love you my wonderful man
butterfly kisses I feel upon my face.
Running your fingers through my hair
sending sensations of sheer delight.
Why should this love keep us apart?
never to meet is our one regret.
nothing can compare the way we feel
the joy of our love a pleasure we share.

You are in my heart beyond eternity.



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Written November 12th, 2004

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  • Thefedexpope
    December 8, 2004
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    love is not eternal
    or is it?
    dun dun dun


  • CatastropheWaitress
    November 23, 2004
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    Awesome!

    Heheh...... ah the wonderful feeling of love..... I felt a great wave of happiness wash over me when I read this poem..... another well written work


  • jenelda silver member
    November 12, 2004
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    Thank you Ed for your wonderful comment on my poem, I like to write from the heart just as you do Jennifer


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    November 12, 2004
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    Amazing Love..

    WOW.... such a special love and hoeart you possess. With each word flows as naturally as your heart beating. to feel such passion and love within is such a special gift, but to write it the way you do is amazing.


  • jenelda silver member
    November 12, 2004
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    Thank you ceegeeess for your wonderful comment om my poem-Jennifer


  • ceegeeess
    November 12, 2004
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    Oh! Nice of you!

    Running your fingers through my hair
    sending sensations of sheer delight' yes, it is true my sweet jenni! so lovely is your expresssion of love. keep writing such nice verse.

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