The road to chaos
so says my friend
is nothing but time
that leads to the end,
It starts with a thought
just one man's dream
inevitable still
a nation's scream,
compassion is gone
souls go astray
so says my friend
on this great day,
today is my friend
tomorrow is cold
just ask yourself
what does it hold.
Author notes
Written November 11th, 2004
A contest entry
- A Bend in the Road by second-born.
500 points, ended November 10, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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I like the flow of your poem...for it went smoothly as I've read it...and I also like the focus of your poem...we are the only ones who could really tell what our future holds...thank you for sharing a wonderful write...
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Henry, this is a great piece of creative literature. It really got me thinking.But i promise that the new road you will soon be on will be far from chaos.Your buddy...Bob
PS. keep writing..your very good!
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Hey little buddy. I just read your note on my home page.. Never new what hit me. lol
Well at my age I hope time leads to more than chaos. I hope to find the answeres I was denied while here. If the questions still have meaning then.
If today is your friend your having a great day.
I hope you have a wonderful Christmas.
Tell Mom and sis I said "Hi!"
And there's HUGS for all to pass around.
Den
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The future holds many things, all of which we know nothing about.
I really enjoyed this write. Very profound.
Sam
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Great questions you pose to us and I enjoyed this poem.
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