Jesus hold me,
make me whole,
give salvation,
save my soul.
Jesus tell me
words so true,
never ending,
love from you.
Jesus teach me
how to pray,
take my burdens,
on this day.
Jesus show me,
your sweet love,
fill my heart,
from above.
Jesus make me,
feel reborn,
cleanse my soul,
this new morn.
Hold me Jesus,
help me through,
oh sweet Jesus,
I love you.
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Written November 11th, 2004
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Thank you so much for reading and leaving a nice comment. I thought it would be great for kids to read. Take care, Sandy
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wow!! This was so beautiful. I think putting it under childrens category was great. keep up the amazing writes
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That was very touching Iloved it , I'm a new poet and I loved it!!
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What a beautiful prayer for children. Simple not complicated , easy for them to understand.Written with much thought and feeling. Excellent, well done...Take care...
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Thank you so much Laura for your lovely comment.
I put it in the childrens catagory in hopes it would reach some of the hurting kids on here. God bless you, your friend, Sandy 
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Thank you for the nice comment, it is always appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poem, I do appreciate it. I hope it reaches some of the young kids on here . Take care, Sandy
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So simple and so sweet and so...TRUE! it is great and such and uplifting write amongst the downers that are on here. May God bless you for sharing this sweet prayer!
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Oh I know he is reading this and smiling down upon you, this was truely a pretty write and you did an awsome job on this GOD BLESS AND TAKE CARE LAURA
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What an exhillerating ride with your words at the helm. This is exquisite and filled with joy and praise. This was such a pleasure to read!
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Thank you so much Tamara, I thought the kids on here could use a simple poem of God in the childrens catagory.My heart goes out to some of them. Take care, Sandy
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You mind your mother little fellow and get your Sunday clothes on and wash behind your ears.
Thank you for leaving a nice comment. I appreciate it comimg from you. Take care, Sandy
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to be held near and feel the wholeness that does appear when our spirit becomes alive is most rewarding gift from life.
I like the style you chose
Tamara
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a nice poem, flows along with smooth rhythm. you can't make me go to church, argghh get off my hair, i don't want to go
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i didnt say i wasnt a nice poem
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Thanks pozo, I thought I'd write a simple prater for the childrens catagory, some of them sure need God in their lives. I always love your comments. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you Ann, I read so much about cutting and suicide from these young teenagers, I felt like writing something positive for kids to read. If I only reach one that will make God smile. Take care, Your friend Sandy
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A great write which I liked a lot I liked the rhythm and rhyme of this poem, it was excellently written and the rhyme was simple- great write
Thanks for commenting on my poem,
God bless,
Pozo
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Thank you so much for te lovely comment. I look forward to hearing from you, Take care, Sandy.
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Wow the whole think flowed well...And you accomplished so much which such short little verses!
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A sweet and beautiful childrens prayer, very touching and loving, right from the heart as a child would say it. Beautiful write Sandy!
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Wow a lovely prayer I liked it a lot Beautiful write Thanks for commenting on my poem This was a good write to Jesus
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Thank you for the comment I was not worried how it rhymed, I was sitting here writing what I wanted to say to God. It was a personal write.
Take care, Sandy
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nice poem, but i feel ur pushing some rimes
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Thank you , I got home and had to write this Our conversation had me thinking of when I was saved. I put it in the childrens catagory for the younger poets. Hope you are doing okay. Take care, Sandy
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as you know I don't know much about prayer but this I can feel is filled with love... very heartfelt xx
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