you didn't have
to be so rough,
you didn't have
to make me bleed
i was frozen,
shocked still
your grip
was too tight,
i couldn't fight back,
i couldn't even move,
so why use so much force?
but you had
to hurt me,
scratch me,
bleed me
as if violation
wasn't enough
your hands,
so dirty
and calloused,
your nails,
so sharp
touching me,
tearing my skin
Author notes
work in progress
Written November 10th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Cut Your Heart Out... by x3 Bang Bang x3.
300 points, ended December 28, 2004, 44 entries
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actually i am in a group on here for this sort of thing, it's called Beautifully Tainted, you might wanna consider joining it.
thanks for your kind words, i am sorry you understand.
~Kate -
Wow. This poem is really sad. I love the way you word things. I know what it is like and if you ever need someone to talk to you can talk to me, I know you don't know me but I am here if you need someone.
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yes it happened
~Kate -
thank you. ((((((((((huggies)))))))))))))
~Kate -
That bastard, it pains, angers and frustrates me so much that something such as this even happened and for him to get away with it is just outrageous! Honey, I am here for you, if you ever want to talk or need someone to listen to you, I am here
... cause I understand, Sexual Abuse, Rape is SICK and should NEVER even exist, I'm sorry you are dealing with this, you should never have to, and you are not alone 
---Sara
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i like it... its emotional and yet sweetly simple... so much packed into so little... if you plan on completing it (as per your comment on it) please let me know, i would love to see a finished product... if it is already done, ignore me, im dumb
thanks for giving this one to us...
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very nice poem i love it
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well then i was effective, because that's how i feel when i think about it, sick and small and scared and alone and unsafe. thank you for your kind words.
~Kate
Edited on Oct 11, 8:34 p.m. because ''. -
WOW. It does hurt when I read this. I am so sorry if this happened in your real life. If it did then I hope that you find the strength in you to keep battling the demons that plague you and to find the courage to seek help. I was like that when I was two. I couldn't really remmeber what all happened but I know who did it. Great job on the poem and keep your head held high. It will all work out for the better.
heather -
This makes my stomach churn to read it, like I could throw-up or something. If this really happened then I hope you found some help. If you didn't then I beg you please do; I can't stress enough how important it is. It's good that you can write about it and not keep things only on the inside.
God bless.
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