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Scared

alone and afraid,
cowering
in the corner
and under the sheets

i know that i
am supposed to be
an adult

but i feel
so small

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Written November 10th, 2004

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  • blackestrose
    November 15, 2004
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    wow sounds like me after i watched the movie gothica now that was scary! anyway great poem!
    tomie-


  • Sara Bellem
    November 10, 2004
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    Aw, what a sad write, if you ever need me, please IM me anytime I adore and appreciate you tremendously and your writes I can gretly relate to and feel. You have quite a talent and your poetic skill shines through and through in even your most saddened writes, beautifully written. ---Sara


  • prettyangeleyes
    November 10, 2004
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    I think that we all feel like this from one time to another. Great write and I hope that you come out from under your shell and discover this world around us. Great job
    Heather

  • Mistress Keely
    November 10, 2004
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    i can relate to this one. it nice.


  • Rele anmwe
    November 10, 2004
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    I think it is wonderful piece. I think most people can relate to it as well. You have a bless day and thank you for sharing it


  • crystaltips
    November 10, 2004
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    aww cool- i like this and i can relate. Well done Crystal xx

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