You came, and then you left
I was not ready for goodbye today
Though It was still normal
And hours went by
A knock on the basement window
awoke me from my gaze at the computer screen
I knew it was you, but I diddnt look back
I fell upon the couch and curled myself up
You removed the dusty pane
And slid onto the floor
I felt you stare at my naked back
And I was convinced that I wanted this
You slid your hand infont of me
Knowing how I crave your scent
As I sighed in return, you placed your form on the couch
You were wearing the pants you wore today
And your unbuttoned cloth jacket hung against your chest
I saw my reflection in your thin glasses
As you grabbed my wrist and pulled me towards you
And felt my bare skin press into your body
I rubbed up against you
With my arms around your torso
And laid my head on your stomach
I heard your quiet chuckle
While you brushed your hands through my hair
Your bright hazel eyes
danced upon every part of my body
I knew where we were going
And I asked your permission to go lock the door
You let go of my wrists
And I could feel myself dripping down my thighs
I locked the door and turned around
To see your gaze upon this body of mine, all for you
As our desperate eyes met
I saw you push your innocence away
And your mind set on desire
Author notes
heehee...my first real erotica!! ^_^
Written November 9th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Sensual pre-write extravaganza by piccola.
900 points, ended August 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - erotic lust or making love by Blissfullhatred.
800 points, ended August 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i wanna se more of this...
Billy's Baby
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I especially like the last line. the contest asks for sensual though and there is a difference between sensuality and erotic. This is closer to erotica I'm afraid
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wow i really like this it is so erotica but not overly sexy great job..ttyl~jess
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yay!
i really like this.... its very sexy...
i really like the addition of holding the wrists.... makes it feel more easy for me to identify to.
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Good stuff
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i really enjoyed this, it's a cross between some kind of fantasy and a sweet, innocent romance, I don't know why but it had me thinking of two teenagers, with the sneaking in and all...maybe i'm just weird, very well done though
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Woo! This is awesome!
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Amazing
Wow, this is awesome. I love the images you build. For your first real erotica poem, this is a doozie. Keep writing. Please, keep writing. -
i think this is great! its a combination between the fantasies of women and the real experiences (your lucky if its true haha) great job
Edited on Nov 09, 9:55 p.m. because ''.
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