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You Let This Happen

And even if I knew how to stop this...
             I wouldn't.

 You've found a way to
Stop my heart from beating in it's
            Normal way into a whole new light
I feel like I'm entering a whole new world
  The beauty I saw in the world
              Doesn't even come close to
   Measuring up to you...
My beautiful.

           How did you get into me like that?
You let this all happen; you let me slip up
       I stopped guarding my heart, and
              Like a hypnotized idiot
         I started giving it away
                                  to you.

See what you're doing to me?
   Turning me into some raving lunatic
                But I don't care
 Just let me be yours; let me call you mine
                     I could be whatever you wanted me to be
  As long as I had you

What is this?
 What happened to my strong hold on my life; my will?
              Like some kind of ...
I don't know..
                   You're here

Author notes

Just meeting the man of dreams..that's all
Written November 9th, 2004

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  • angelheart99
    March 17, 2006
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    good

    lucky you i wish i could find that man, this poem was very beautiful thank you for the experiance of reading it, keep up the good work!!