Night after night tears came,
I was killed by my loneliness,
Everything stayed the same,
No one seemed to notice.
I was killed by my ways,
now I just count the days.
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Written November 8th, 2004
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But you're still here
That must say something, eh?! Hehehe. This was a lovely short little poem. Very sad and heart wrenching, but lovely nontheless. Very well done.
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short, sweet
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Aww...;-; Mommy...*clings and whimpers* It's okay.
Chellie
xoxo -
You have reveiled your own secret to exit out here.
If we can't change others, then we need to change ourself
and how we react to them and the conditions they bring to us.
If we do this, then we are in control and they no longer are...
Happy Holidays
Eddy -
days are countless when the tears are lived infinitely. light escapes from life leaving only DARKness to prevail. good luck in the contest, DARK.
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haha...
hold my hand. and you'll feel the pain no longer -
*huggles you tighter still, yet managing to not break a rib* Very emotionally impacting. I understand how this loneliness can feel...if you ever wanna talk, I'm here.
Good job, Sun. -
hugs you even tighterrrr and a big smooch to go with it
nice little piece you have here, it defintaly wasnt difficult to read, but um its sad to think that this is actually how it is for a large number of ppl in their lives, who just stay so lonely, and in the end it really can kill you. nice job on this one
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hugs you tight goodbye Sandra, i love you now, and won't ever stop
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