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Hello God

Dear Lord I need to talk to you,
I am feeling a little down today,
come sit and talk with me awhile,
could we just sit and pray.

I know my problems are not gigantic,
and I know you will understand,
I know you will hold and comfort me,
please Lord come hold my hand.

Lord I know the day I  met you,
you lifted all my burdens away,
you cleansed my soul of my sins
I felt brand new that day.

Lately things have gotten me down,
and I don't know what to do,
there is a problem in my life,
please Lord tell me what to do.

Lord I look to you for the answer,
let me know what I should do,
I put my faith in you Dear Lord,
I will wait for an answer from you.  












 

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Written November 8th, 2004

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  • Sandygram silver member
    September 17, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you as always for the lovely comment. Thank you for reading an older poem. You are very nice and it has been a pleasure talking to you.Take care and God Bless, Sandy

  • shubs
    September 17, 2005
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    Spiritually Awesome

    And He answereth to all who calleth Him from the deepest oceanic hearts to the highest pinnacles of Love--Shubs

  • Sandygram silver member
    November 15, 2004
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    Thank you for the wonderful connents. God inspires me to write about His wonderful love . Take care, Sandy
  • PHsNiece
    November 15, 2004
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    your peoms are so inspiring, just being in His presence is amazing, and that you can put words to it is so beautiful. Take Care

  • Sandygram silver member
    November 9, 2004
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    Thank you so much Ann for your kind words last night and this morning. They mean alot to me. I was having a little bad day yesterday but I talked to God and prayed with my good friend and fellow poet live4eternity last night.. I feel great today. God does work His wonders. Thank you for your sweet concern, it means alot to me. God bless you my friend. Sandy

  • November 9, 2004
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    It's a wonderful thing, faith, that when we are troubled we know God is there, to hold our hand and help us through. Your prayer shows much strength, that all will be well through him, and it's very beautiful, comes strait from the heart. Take care Sandy. Ann
  • Crissy
    November 8, 2004
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    Thanks for commenting on mine and urs was awesome. I enjoyed it alot. Thanks Crissy

  • Sandygram silver member
    November 8, 2004
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    Thank you Colin, This was just written as I talked to him before. It is simple and what I wanted to say to him. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    November 8, 2004
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    Thank you so much, I always love your comments. I'm okay now., we all have a bad day now and then.

  • ColinSJones
    November 8, 2004
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    another lovely prayer straight from the heart ..it is good sometimes to just sit inHis presence ...keep on keeping on Sandy and you will get your answers ~ col
  • Mia Donna
    November 8, 2004
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    You were crying when you wrote it? Aw that's so sad! You should add that in an author's comment. It adds to the poem. The colour scheme is good too. But you're very good at spiritual poems and prayers and such. They're not just fluff, they're from the heart.

  • Sandygram silver member
    November 8, 2004
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    Sorry I was crying when I wrote it, I fixed the errors. Take care, Sandy

  • HeartSoulofIce
    November 8, 2004
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    Are you new at this? this was good. I am not much of a rhyming person but I liked this pice. Just watch your spelling and keep going let it continue to flow with out cutting it off to early. If you would like to check out some of my stuff just go to my page. But bravo and well done. Please let me know if you have any other poems. oe If you are new let me know if you have any questions, I have been doing this for awhile and know alot about this site and the way the things work around here. So I will talk to you later
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