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Life Implosion

i looked inside
and i found nothing
a nothingness so deep
that it drained away the daylight
the absence of my inner self
sucked all existence into me
trying to fill the infinite void
where my soul should be
a life implosion
leaving nothing where nothing began

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Written November 8th, 2004

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