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A Girl That I Admired (new verison)

a girl that I admired,
she lives to far away,
But not far away from my heart,
This is my older sister I am talking about,
She is the girl that I admired from way long ago,
But I still admire her now,
She writes poems,
She even makes good french toasts,
when she use to live here,
a girl that I admired,
She also was a good girl,
my friend made fun of her,
Because she thinks my sister doesn't know how to read a water label,
But believe me she knows,
She also made people to laugh at my sister,
But I still admire my sister more,
I know her too long,
She is a good person,
She is a good poet,
She loves to put on the radio,
She loves so many things that I can't explain at all,
A girl that I admired,
She does art,
It is good art,
A girl that I admired,
From bottom to the top,
It's getting there more times,
and more times,
a girl that I admired.

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Written November 8th, 2004

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