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Injured

I wish you could physically injure me
As my incapacity already has.
Scars beg to be reopened
But my mouth begs to be kissed!
A numbness is creeping, darling,
Creeping oh-so-slowly up my legs...
Soon I won't feel anything anymore.
Would you care if the reason was you?
Do you hope the reason is you
When you see me walking?
Every waking moment
Do you long to crucify me
As you do now with your carelessness, darling?
I'm awake, I'm here forever.
You can force me down and inject your poison,
But act quickly, you may not be needed much longer...

Author notes

Heh. Kinda Garbage inspired...

-A
Written November 7th, 2004

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  • Scarlett silver member
    November 9, 2004
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    Ya know what -- *growls* LOL My new name is Shirley Lee. MUHAHAHAHA Along with Ana, Anastasia, Katja, Little Miss Lee, Twinkle Toes, Tasha, Scarlett, Miss Fiddle-dee-dee, Anya and SOOOO many others...

    -A


  • November 8, 2004
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    not too surprising it is garbage-inspired, coming from you, little miss shirley manson wannabe lol i'm just fuckin with ya, i love the poem and your new hair! keep up the good looks and good writing!

    yours till the sphincter winks,
    matt

  • Confused Gemini
    November 8, 2004
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    Wow, great write hun!! I am wondering if this is about someone and if it is then if it is about who I think it is about... Anyway, this piece has a great flow and lots of emotion. You did a wonderful job writing this my dear. Keep it up!!!!


    ~ur sis~
    Gem

    p.s.- woohoo I beat Marie at commenting first yay!!!!!
    Edited on Nov 08, 8:59 because 'typo'.