Through my clouded eyes,
You won't see happy blue skies.
There won't be any green to the grass,
No one will care, they'll all just pass.
The world will be black and white,
No longer will the stars nor the sun be bright.
The trees will all be dead,
All the leaves will keep faling like the tears you shed.
All year round you'll feel alone and cold,
It'll feel like to the devil your souls been sold.
Your life will always be set aflame,
Everyday you'll feel like a hopeless shame.
Every morning and every night you'll take the same little pills,
Hoping one day they'll be you that they kill.
The times you're called "Devil" or "Sunshine"
you'll feel the sting of when he said "You're mine."
Through my clouded eyes
You'll feel the tears of my silent cries.
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I think its quite good...opinions? And yes... I feel this way...
Written November 7th, 2004
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why did i applaud this? i didn't like it...GA
nods softly and then leaves i...i can't begin to understand Sandra, but...i..can try..to accept your decision kisses your cheek lightly i love you Sandra, i just...wanted you to know that -
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Very powerful piece, full of emotion and feeling. Great job, congratulations on a poem very well written.
Try to stay strong, Sun. huggles for you
~The Nekojin. -
I am speachless, That was amaizing.
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