CURTAINS FOR YOU
curtains curtains - peeking curtains!
undressing me with their eyes,
their softness is a trap!
curtains, monstrous petafilish curtains
watching the children outside
sizing them up, always watching...
blinds blinds deceitful blinds
darkening out, rolling on their track
making everything in this room pitch black
watching, darkening, covering
covering up for the curtains I bet
blinds blinds - typical blinds
cut apart by the industry
twist their chord
to open, to close, to half open
or move them down the row
they were victimized....
in the morning they try to choke me
blankets blankets
undercover blankets
posing as curtains to fill that one window
the blankets are on my side
watching the curtains with their patchful eyes
keeping the peace or peace keeping
Curtains curtains Vicious curtains!
undressing me with their eyes
sending plans to the roller blinds
confirming with the normal blinds
undressing outsiders and taking pictures
aligned with the buttons
working together - for a more naked house
Author notes
hmm paranoia can be so much fun
Written November 6th, 2004
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lol have you read "screwy threads"? it's even better than this one
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Very amusing and very original.. not the type I'd normally go for but I did enjoy it. And paranoia... *shudders*...
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glad to share! glad to comment and attempt to be useful
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Teehee.. this is funnyly amusing. looks at window... Now don't you blinds get any ideas.... looks back at screen.. If something happens... I blame you .lol
jk doll. Cute write and thanks for ya'll's comment on my piece. ~CD
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LOL
ha
thanks for dropping by! now I want to see that cartoon you spoke of! -
hehehe it's curtains for you, makes me think of some cartoon joke i saw somewhere the other week, a woman is in the bath and her young son says mum there's a blind man at the door, sighing she thinks well if he's blind he cant see me naked, so she says send him up and stays in the bath, next appears a man who is selling blinds lol
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Oh my... that creeps me out! I have blinds, curtains, and many blankets all in one little bedroom. This poem will cause a curatin/blind/blanket phobia! You have no idea, heh. Nice work though, this was hella funny.
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FUNNY
this poem is awesome, very creative and FUNNY, i'll never look at my curtains the same way after reading this, too bad we can't enter our own contest, just kidding!! keep on writing... keep on being... keep on making art... penumbrapoet -
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Tis very interesting. I like it. My voices love it and toss all their pixie stix to you. (it's a good sign)
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Lol, very unique indeed.
Interesting.... lol.... well written
Haha, it kept me amused... so, thank you!
Take care etc
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