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self inflicted

a double edged sword
it bites the hands that hold it
theres no blood
but massive scars
no bandages
but still pain

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Written July 29th, 2002

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  • Gingetsuryuu
    July 13, 2003
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    I think its a talent to write a meaingfull poem in so few words, this one has great meaning and little words, which i think is wonderfull :-)
    -Anaheren

  • Broken Reflections
    April 24, 2003
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    well damm gurl i really liked this poem, it was very deep, short powerful and well written, great write
    ~Broken Reflections~
    Edited on Apr 24, 1:21 because ''.

  • beautifulworld
    August 26, 2002
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    I'm not sure if I get it, because lots of differant meaning can be drawn from this poem, but I think it's beautiful and it has a strange sort of comfort to it...

  • starburn
    August 21, 2002
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    thank you very much, i'm not sure at the moment even if i understand this one, but that's because i'm never really sure what i mean by it.


  • TheOtherYou
    August 21, 2002
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    neutral

    i have a song called 'self-inflicted.' it's just on paper though. anyways, i like this and in a strange way...i think i get it.

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