I'm delirious again
Your stars have not changed, nor have mine
Defective heart
Crying for certain oblivion
Time is all that's left behind
Beyond the eternal stars of my burning heart
Will our souls be entwined one more time?
In this deep delirium?
Our time will come in these distant days
Certain oblivion leaves nothing but memories
So anathematise the closed laughter
For time recedes my blank infinity
Author notes
Written on 5th November 2004 at 14:57 GMT
Hmm, interesting. This was the organisation of my three minute thought. Wheeeeeee.
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This is a good one for sure. I don't know if it's the right one though 0_0. I liked it, it was pretty interesting. Shorty but goody. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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I mean its good and all, but I'm simply not impressed. that's just me though.. goodluck.
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I don't know how to say it, but I liked this as well. Just something about it. You're really good, really good.
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I like this poem too The line Blank Infinity " got to me as if you didn't believe in an everafter or something that is will not be in any case it seems to foreshadow some kind of end. cake
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Crazy girl.. THis is wonderful you did wonderful job on this hunny. I think I shall make my way to a dictionary
Just kidding. Awesome write
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nice write
"Will our souls be entwined one more time?" I totally love this line!!!!! This poem is so cool! Keep up the good work!
~laura
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soulful
correct me if i'm wrong but this reads a lot like soulmate poetry, which i adore, i especially loved the line "Your stars have not changed, nor have mine"-- on a certain level i can really relate to that. it's really excruciating when you know who your soulmate is in this lifetime but are prevented from being with them for whatever reason (personal experience). keep on writing... keep on being... keep on making art... penumbrapoet
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