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Three Minute Thought

Is it coming?
Organise my thoughts
Protect my heart
Tainted souls
Leave it all behind
Delirious again
Souls entwined one more time
Will my time come?
Certain oblivion
Leaving no memory
What will be left behind?
Time succeeds every day
So anathematise
Closed laughter
Distant days
No stars have changed
Can't be the same
Not meant for you
Feel my heart burning
Our time will come
Certain oblivion leaving nothing but memories
All that's left behind is time
Time recedes blank infinity

Author notes

Written on 5th November 2009 at 14:40 GMT

Writing without thinking.

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  • Elrenia
    November 12

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    Too random and chaotic for my tastes. I am wondering where the legend comes in. Not to mention your name. Did you read the rules?

    Thank you for sharing.

    rous


  • PrettyRagDoll
    June 28, 2005
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    Ah... if 14:40 is a time, I see that insomnia has granted my contest yet another poem. Sometimes writing without thinking ironically can help organize your thoughts. I loved the repetition of the words behind and time. You fit them in different places and still made it work. Thank you for entering my contest!

  • Nicole Hanna
    January 15, 2005
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    Very nice thought process you have going on in this poem. I like the form with the short lines and the spaces between each line... for some reason, that just really appeals to me. I think because it adds to the power of the words a little bit more. This was a great read, thanks for entering it!


  • November 10, 2004
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    Very lovely. I think i like this form or style for this better than the other one I saw based off of your three minute thought. Wonderful poem hunny

    ~!~ Jessica Erin ~!~


  • nOva-
    November 6, 2004
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    wow, intresting what you can squeeze out of three minutes, nice job!very expressive and twisting and turning, ..nice write, consice !

  • DevilsWrongHand
    November 5, 2004
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    nice write

    ummmmm...nice! I love the last two lines of your poem! Keep up your wonderful writing.
    ~laura

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