The sea
Is so peaceful,
So brilliant,
And so strong.
The sea
Is so calm,
Yet so violent,
And so threating.
To those who are stranded,
It feels like Hell.
But to those who are safe,
It is Heaven.
It is a home,
Yet people pollute it.
It is a gift,
Yet people destroy it.
Author notes
I'm just so MAD that people Pollute the beautiful ocean.
Written November 4th, 2004
A contest entry
- Anything!!! by C J Weatherholt.
350 points, ended November 9, 2004, 67 entries
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This is very true. I don't get to see the ocean much. I love its beauty. Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck. Much luvs~Crystal
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nice poem...everything you've said in the poem is so true...i think the ocean is cool especially the sound...but like around the marina you just sit there while the sun in out...water sparkling and waves the sound and the wind...the combination is EXCELLENT very peaceful and calming
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