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Past Caring

I missed you for a while
But then I thought
It's your fault
Why should I feel bad?

I'm past caring now
I'm almost over you
It's your loss
Now you have to get over me!

Author notes

hey...sorry this is shitty but i've had no inspiration lately - this is just to get out an emotion thats been driving me crazy! (so its not really a poem! ah well!) Enjoy!! kaz xx
Written November 4th, 2004

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  • Forms of Me
    January 1, 2005
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    I dont think it is that bad...I actually like it. It vents your emotions well..and I think it flows.

    Keep up the writing.


  • Samplette gold member
    November 5, 2004
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    This is true poetry in my opinion...real and from the heart.
    It is so wonderful when we are finally passed the caring and ready to move on. It is a rebirth of sorts. Great write.
    Sam


  • JenP
    November 4, 2004
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    I've felt the exact same way and I really like this. Short but simple and to the point. Clear message, nicely done.

  • aon
    November 4, 2004
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    actually i like this one very much.