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I Wish I Was.....

I wished to be pretty,
to be anyone but me,
I wished to be pretty,
this reflection to never see.

Why does she get all the guys,
is it because of her eyes?
The ones that feed those lies.

Maybe it's because she's skinny,
yeah, she's able to wear that mini,
and looks damn good in that bikini.

So you put girls like me down,
always leaving me with a frown,
in my tears leaving me to drown.

I wished to be pretty,
to be anyone but me,
I wished to be pretty,
this reflection to never see.

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meh.
Written November 3rd, 2004

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  • PureAmethyst
    November 7, 2004
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    awwwwwwwwww i'm sure u r pretty and anyway a nice person i what counts! xxxxx nice write xxxxx

  • thought i knew
    November 7, 2004
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    no one has the right to make you feel inferior and until you accept who you are then how do you expect others to? this was an amazing write. let out alot of emotion. Take care
    hugs
    liz


  • Tjoonz
    November 7, 2004
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    aww
    its a great poem
    its a great write


  • Em
    November 7, 2004
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    Sounds like something I would say!.....you shouldn't be sayin all that tho'! This was a great write, excellent actually!
    ~Tina


  • ravenofdarkness
    November 6, 2004
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    awww sad really good write tho and your not ugly im sure you are pretty in the inside and thats all that matters always tho you do look pretty in you pic good write love and hugs ^rav^


  • carlspenc1
    November 5, 2004
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    awww` this is really well written and sad to read because you are very pretty indeed , don`t knock yourself because in years to come` that pretty girl you write about will get more ugly with age and then will any of those guys wanna know her ?.
    thankz for sharing
    and
    happy scribbling


  • LaAmyaArlene
    November 4, 2004
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    I can defently relate to feeling like this

  • Seraph1885
    November 3, 2004
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    honey you ARE pretty. Skinny women are bitches. Trust me guys don't like skinny womens. Most of them hangout with them because in media skinny is good and chubby is bad but in the end they all end up getting married with cute cusions liek us. great write I loved the flow and rhyme
    love ya always.
    Seraph


  • MainMatt
    November 3, 2004
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    aww I liked this a lot I liked the rhyme flow Nice great write

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