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Lather

Lather, rinse, repeat; Always repeat...

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Written November 3rd, 2004

A contest entry

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  • K-Dense
    February 19, 2005
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    Hey. A few months ago, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an offical invitation to join my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
    PS Please feel free to read any/all poems posted on this site by k-dense (myself).


  • November 11, 2004
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    Sometimes I repeat, but only if I don't think the shampoo is very strong.
    Love the simplicity!


  • Artemis Gem
    November 11, 2004
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    lol
    always repeat...thats so true...cheap shampoos make it so you have to do twice the work....lol great write! you should make it a bumpersticker....................................
    Gem~chan

  • Artemis Gem
    November 11, 2004
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    lol
    always repeat...thats so true...cheap shampoos make it so you have to do twice the work....lol great write! you should make it a bumpersticker....................................


  • JenP
    November 11, 2004
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    I don't repeat either, but that's ok. Very cute, everyone loves one liners!


  • TheTrickster
    November 11, 2004
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    Hey, I entered this contest also!
    Great write, except, I never repeat...I'm too lazy...

  • AVoiceWithin
    November 10, 2004
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    lol This is great..I dunno but with I thought..its very very true
    -Jenn-


  • glazecovered
    November 9, 2004
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    Mwahahahaha...
    Never mind me, I have a dirty mind. Great one-liner!
    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    ~Anastasia


  • windhover3 gold member
    November 3, 2004
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    I like this. I rarely repeat, but my hair is flat and flaccid as a result...

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