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Amelia

lost for an eternity
because of past memory
of holding you there
as the breath from your body swept away
to make you like me, to live forever
but fowl times bring broken hearts
as beheaded you fall to the ground
Bloody tears from my eyes pour
a new rage began
a new destiny prevailed
if only your dire life could be held
struck by emotion, strange,
cannot move foot nor soul
to render me hepless aginst your killer
so I stand there bold
not to seem stunned
but my weakness being found
he took my heart & body to enslave me
to the ground
Amelia my dear
it is this I fear
that you will never be near
I'll do my best to find you
only the sands of time can tell
when we once again cross paths
& truth will be prevailed
As slowly, I took my last breath

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Great poem just read it its about a past life
Written November 2nd, 2004

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  • punk rawk 101
    June 1, 2005
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    great

    great write loved the emotion and darkness of this i hope you will read some of mine i know i will be readin more of yours soon