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Just A 'B' Poem

Missing image
~by Gregg Rowe~

butt-head bartenders
bitterly brave belligerent
bouncy baffled blond beauties
by boastful bon-mots

Author notes

The towel has been placed in the circle.  Because my collegue enjoyed what I did with her chosen 'A' words in my first poem, Just an 'A' Poem , at our bi-weekly meetings of our writng group TAPS (The Attic Poets Society), I am to be handed a list of words and the challenge to write a coherent poem.  On November 9th, 2004, I will tackle the 'C's, until we have completed the alphabet.  My only worry is the 'Z's.    Gregg
Written November 2nd, 2004

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  • Janice M Pickett
    May 31, 2005
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    Zippity,zappity,Poem with zest.
    Well done for doing your best


  • Empathy-eyes
    November 19, 2004
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    Hmm, I can see how "Z"'s might be a bit of a challenge, but rest assured that it's last . Another enjoyable read my friend, I await the "c" poem.

    Empathy, Kate

  • Hobbit Warrior
    November 6, 2004
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    bravo! bravisimo!
    I love it, and good luck (sorry, couldn't make that start with a .
    Amanda


  • misselaineous
    November 4, 2004
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    brilliant !
    elaine


  • November 4, 2004
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    You did a wonderful job on this Gregg... I'm just thinking about the "x" words... that should be interesting seeing the words you'll have to use. Wonderfully done.. I shall await your 'C' poem

    ~!~ Rosey ~!~


  • angelica silver member
    November 3, 2004
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    Beautiful buxom brunette
    boasts beaut boobs
    because Betty Boop
    became boisterous.


  • -theheartofme-
    November 2, 2004
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    bon mots was on jeopardy last night...how wierd.and coincidental. i how you do well.. i too have done the word contribution thing.. I LOVE IT...love it love it love it. great job my friend. and if you have the chance,, i sponsored my first contest, i would be honored if you decided to contribute.


  • hugh wyles silver member
    November 2, 2004
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    Be brave, buddy!
    Barge boldly backward,
    Broadcasting bullshit blithely
    Before Bush or Binladen buggers balls badly.


  • powerslave
    November 2, 2004
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    You're only worried about doing 'z'? I'd be concerned about 'x' too, and pretty much every other letter in the alphabet! Except maybe 'e', there are plenty of words beginning with that letter. But anyway, that poem must have been very challenging to write, so its very commendable you even attempted. And the fact that it made some assemblance of sense is extremely impressive. Nice one.

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