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Follow The Leader.

Follow the leader.
Walk in my footsteps.
Now don't fall behind.

Follow me to the end of the world.
So I can push you off.
Watch you fall.
Flail your arms.
I'll just wave.

"Never Again"...

Goodbye my sweet.
Your game was cheap.
Each line you spewed.
Each time I fell.

Tables turn.
And this...
You now must earn.

"I still love you"
A line so bitter.
Your intentions?
Mislead.

"Never Again"...

Follow me.
Let me feed you lines.
You glutton.
You pig.
Eat them up.

You already had all of me.
Yet you come back for more.

There's nothing left.

"Never Again"...

Follow the leader.
Follow my lead.
I'll guide you to the end.
The end of the world.

And I'll smile and wave.
Repeat this line you gave, "Never Again."
As you fall to your early grave.

Author notes

umm... Im going through BS.. and yeah.. I feel like screaming. Hitting something... Im so friggin stupid... I hate how I fall each time for each line...

"Never Again"
Written November 1st, 2004

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  • Johnny Wheeler
    November 4, 2004
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    Powerful

    Hi,
    This was pwerful my friend. It almost reads like a song. I loved the structure of this, and the repeated lines add to the impact of the entire write. I wish you the best. Thank you for sharing.
    --Johnny


  • Sheko
    November 3, 2004
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    awwww...i feel for yuh. hopefully things get better! Great poem tho, it should be a song!
    ~Sheko