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Socorro

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www.gangbox.com/mp3/socorro.mp3

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Written November 1st, 2004

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  • inspiteofangels3
    September 12, 2005
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    wow, your an amazing write.. i love like all your poetry!!!!! WOOT WOOT................................<3


  • horus8 gold member
    November 2, 2004
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    It's an alien abduction. the one guy is a fighter pilot, and the other voice is the aliens.


  • Naughtygrlred
    November 2, 2004
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    Japandemonium

  • FrozenDaffodil
    November 2, 2004
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    very nice

    Very intriguing. Interesting use of flat notes...I really enjoyed the hand drumming and the weird chuckle-ish donald duck sounding voice in the background. Nice ending. I tried to listen to what the soldier-voice was saying, but I was paying too much attention to the music itself... I really liked this song. "Socorro"? Was the soldier/dude asking for help or something? does the title relate to the song?