Watch you die
Nice and slowly
Full of pain and misery
Laughing psychotically
As I cut ur skin passionatly.
Your screams so sweet
Like music to my ears
You've totured me for much to long
But now it's you turn to pay.
I am the Jackal
The jackal of pain
Sent here from hell
To send you to your fate
There's no stopping me
You're going to die
So give it up
Don't even try.
I have no mercy
You will feel pain
Pain of me killing you
Gently and Slowly
Taking my time
So your crys of help sink in
For me to cherish them
For all of eternity.
I am the Jackal
The Jackal of pain
Sent here from hell
To send you to your fate
There's no stopping me
You're going to die
So give it up
Dont' even try.
Your screams are fading out
My job is almost done
Your fate is coming near
Satan will have your soul
You're not going to get away with it
This time
I'll make sure of it
You are condemed to hell
Perhaps in your next life
You'll think before you act
Then maybe I won't come back
To torture you again.
I am the Jackal
The Jackal of pain
Sent here from hell
To send you to your fate
There's no stopping me
You're going to die
So give it up
Don't even try.
Author notes
Written November 1st, 2004
A contest entry
- Get Like Me by Dweller of Darkness.
300 points, ended April 13, 2005, 4 entries
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What did you think
Comments
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Ya but it's not a poem its lyrics for my band so it wouldn't sound right if it was written free verse...It sounds better to music though..
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yes i must agree with despair. it was spooky but free verse probably would've suited better. good poem!
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Scary..I think I would have liked this a bit better had it just been written free verse. I didnt mind the rhyme, its just it seemed to ruin the flow a bit. I do think it was a nice write though. Thanks for the entry.
Despair
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