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The Storm

Rain comes down
Pours non-stop
Never changes always the same
Constant down-pour

When the rain hits the ground,
It is the sound of steaks,
Sizzling on the grille
What an awesome sound.

The lightning what a wonderful sight!
It lights up the sky in the darkness of night.
The way it has no set length,
Long or short it is amazing to see.

The thunder roaring through the clouds,
Goes on forever like big drums echoing,
It never stops only fades
Like lost love

What is truly unique is the storm.
It is an awesome orchestra.
With one amazing conductor
But no one notices

We only curse the storm
Not admire it for its beauty
Its music,
Its feeling

It is so relaxing to here the storm
It relaxes the mind
And eases the soul
So I thank the Lord for this beautiful thing

Called The Storm

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Written August 29th, 2003

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  • MoonChild55
    November 21, 2004
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    Wonderful!!!

    From MoonChild55,
    I loved this poem.It brought out what is so beautiful about a storm...something alot of people don't notice.I personally have gotten upset when a storm came...thinking and hoping it would stop.You have reminded me of Gods' beautiful craftmanship .Isn't it funny how sometimes we all forget to stop and smell the roses....Wonderful poem!!


  • acryforhelp
    November 1, 2004
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    this poem was really good and it was even better cause it just stoped raining lol..well great write..keep it up
    Keep it coming from the heart
    Haleigh