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When Freedom Chokes on Society

Save me from dissolving shores
Torn away by savage wars
Fought by bloodthirsty corporate whores
Looking for unopened doors

Please save me from the hungry fascists
Made up of lost and brainwashed masses
The hunger is propelled by madness
A nation overrun by sadness

When something's beneficial, only when people are dead
And when most of the nation's people, agree with what is said
You must look through the bloody tears, and see the lies instead
And destroy the overgrowing madness that swells inside your head.

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Written November 1st, 2004

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  • ThisIsAForgery
    February 4, 2005
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    Wow. This is very....um....straightforward. Yeah, that's the word I was looking for. Haha. I really like the rhyming. It's awesome. Way to go! <3

    Kylie