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Fly


It's the people who are tied down that try the hardest to fly.


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Written November 1st, 2004

A contest entry

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  • K-Dense
    February 19, 2005
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    Hey. A few months ago, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an offical invitation to partake in my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
    PS Please feel free to read any/all poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself).

  • K-Dense
    December 16, 2004
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    Reminds me of the quote "Those afraid to fall never fly."-Ms. Dynamite.-Curtis Meyer

  • Gosia
    December 16, 2004
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    Such a great point summed up so brilliantly, it really is great, i like the message.. well done!!
    xCx

  • Tinamac
    November 15, 2004
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    I love the fact that this is so true!
    COOL!!!


  • glazecovered
    November 8, 2004
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    And more often than not it is those people who fly highest and proudest.
    Most people only try if they have obstacles to overcome.
    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    ~Anastasia


  • macandrew
    November 4, 2004
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    good

    I worked a number of wheelchair camps and I can really agree with this one. Wow, they tired me out.

    Nicely said.
    John


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    November 1, 2004
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    I like this one-liner. I have never heard it before but it is truly awesome.

    ~Lyrical

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