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Unaware

Missing image


Crossed-legged, was a poise that I could once adopt;
Now, its more a straddle....

Hunched in my chair, I fiddle with keys, playing a tune
in my mind with words....

Exterior scenes, I can now ignore, as I roam in the realms
of fantasy and fiction.......

As I place the words to the music in my mind, I become aware of a transition......

The fingers, work by themselves, forming the sentences;
Binding together words, into some semblance of sense..

Do I realise what I write till it is written?
Am I aware that it makes sense to others?
Will I continue with this ?
Have I a choice?
No..........the muse has her way...........

 

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Written November 1st, 2004

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  • cutiepie gold member
    November 7, 2004
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    , glad you know this feeling of being observed


  • ca ne fait rien
    November 7, 2004
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    Hey- did someone leave my webcam on?

  • cutiepie gold member
    November 4, 2004
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    Thank you very much for your kind words

  • anne
    November 2, 2004
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    Thanks for entering my contest. This poem was neat. I also find it intriguing to see how poems come together in such interesting ways. I like this line:

    "Do I realise what I write till it is written?"

    I know I never do! Thanks again for the entry!
    -anne-