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Powerless Points


Screamed words of the individual go unheard.

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It requires more than one person to make great changes.
Written October 31st, 2004

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  • Vickie J
    December 13, 2004
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    This is absolutely the truth. Very wisely put


  • black--phoenix
    November 15, 2004
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    excellent work! its a very short piece of writing, but it packs quite the punch. keep up the awesome writing, lacerate.